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Thomas Stone's avatar

This poem has such a beautiful flow to it. Excellent work!

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Aldo Jonsson's avatar

Thank you! I leaned into the alliteration and internal rhymes more than usual, and I'm please with what that produced.

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Thomas Stone's avatar

Once you finish this series you should consider publishing it as a collection.

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